Space-ageWrangler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Land Home to Dreams - AIM]

Wow, thank you! Really like the otherworldly theme!

carboluka responds:

Glad to live up to the standards!

[Badbadumda.mp3]

I think the piano could use a little more variation, especially rythmically, since it does the same 1-123 type melody for half the song. The other instruments are well done though.

[Open]

This one feels a bit like a good song and a bad one taped together, I really like the slow parts with the nice rythm and the transition into them with that tempo change is great is great (like at 1:20), but I feel like the faster parts break the mood of the song a bit.

The main problem for me is the percussion, the way it repeats the same sound so quickly really makes it stand out that it's a drum machine and not a real instrument, plus I don't like the melody on top too much.

Overall the idea of changing between the parts is nice though, and I think it might be interesting to change up the background synth in those parts to make them more distinct. I will also say the instruments you chose all work pretty well together.

Btw, I noticed you used Audacity for this, I assume it was for the fade in and out, but you can actually do that more easily if you add a modulator channel in beepbox, plus it lets you do a lot of other cool stuff.

[Jazz progression?]

This is a nice one, it feels a bit more like one cohesive song than some of the others (although I guess it is a bit shorter too), plus the percussion is nice. The only thing is that maybe the synth/idiophone that does the background chords could do something a little more interesting.

[Inevitability]

I'd love this is if weren't for that annoying drum machine, it really doesn't do the song any favors. Also, I feel like the transitions between parts are a little phoned in, you could have added in some cool tempo changes or something but the way you did most of them makes them seem like each part is a different song.