Space-ageWrangler's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Friday Night Funkin' - Boyfriend]

It's nice to see a fanart of boyfriend that is actually a redesign instead of just taken straight from the game.

Next time you should probably upload all the pictures vertically, the top one is horizontal and the only way for me to look at it is to turn my head lol.

Edit: My guess is you took the picture with your phone and it saved it horizontally, as I don't think Newgrounds would rotate it automatically. You could probably rotate it with a computer program (I think even Paint would work for this).

KingsCrown03 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I have no idea why it was uploading all the pictures vertically, I don't know how to fix it.

[Desert Ruins]

You can pull the LISA style off very well, and the foreground stuff looks nice (there's just a little segment of that pillar in the center-right that has a thinner outline, and it breaks the efect a bit I think).

As for the background, I like that you didn't give the mountains an outline, but I don't like the sky. That blue feels a bit too bright (I know that it shows up in the game too, but it really catches your eye here), maybe it could do with some more variation (the game uses gradients and stuff but I guess that can be difficult to do in pixel art).

The thing I really hate is that big sun, it feels like its just there to fill up space and I don't like how it goes with the blue (again, it really draws your attention).

Overall though, the brown colors you chose are pretty nice, and the scene as a whole is nice to look at.

EDIT: Yeah, I didn't even notice it, thought the sky was just one color haha.

shroomkid responds:

Thanks, I was told that the gradient I used for the sky wasn't noticeable enough, so that might've been part of the problem.

[Big Dirty Desert]

I like the look of that reddish ridge in the background, plus giving it that thin outline was a good choice.

What I like the least is the sand, I would experiment with some different colors (you could consider ones that are less realistic but look nicer, maybe something that contrasts better with that bright sun?).

Still I'm always happy to see more landscapes and stuff like that on Newgrounds.

coysavoyboy responds:

I was going for that brown rainbow look, but I think you're right. Probably should put more blue/green as it gets darker.

This is a work in progress anyway. I do want to add texture to the sand, plus I want the color to contrast the other assets I add

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!